Paranormal Activity

12 years ago, a little film called The Blair Witch Project polarized both the horror community and the movie-going public. You either loved it or hated it; there appeared to be no middle ground. 8 years after its release, the inevitable comparisons began when Paranormal Activity made its debut. Hand-held cameras, allegedly based on a true story…you get the idea. Hailed as “the scariest movie ever,” Paranormal Activity proved once again that you don’t need a lot of special effects to sell a horror movie. And no, you do NOT always need to see the monster. What you need more than anything is a decent story–this is not bias just because I’m a writer. No amount of CGI wizardry is going to impress me if the story is, and I quote, “a steaming pile of gopher shit.” Because I’m also an editor–it’s my job to recognize crap when I see it. Any writer needs to make sure that they maintain the internal logic of their story; once readers/viewers start to question a character’s actions or reactions, you have a problem.

Katie is likeable and believable. Her escalating fear makes her very sympathetic. Micah, on the other hand, is a flaming douchewhistle. Occupational hazard, perhaps, since he’s a day trader. Anyway, it’s his macho bullshit and complete disregard for Katie’s feelings that escalate the activity, but it’s completely in character for him. Let’s be honest, he got what was coming to him. The activity itself, and Katie’s response to it, works well to create a sense of terror that keeps building as the attacks become more intense. The final scene, in which Katie comes back upstairs with the heavy, thudding steps of the demon, is frightening because you know it’s Katie, but you also know that those are the same footsteps Katie and Micah have heard for several weeks. The idea that Katie and the demon have merged at last is especially terrifying when you consider that this entity has plagued Katie since she was 8 years old and, unlike in a traditional haunting, she cannot run from it.   

Paranormal Activity almost succeeded (and yes, I’ve seen it before). But you, gentle reader, know by now that I am a curmudgeonly and cantankerous old woman when it comes to horror, and so you surely know that something about this film pissed me off (aside from the fact that it was overly-hyped and generally overrated). And so it is this: if your girlfriend is nearly catatonic, bleeding profusely from having clutched a cross with all her strength, TURN THE DAMNED CAMERA OFF AND DRIVE HER TO THE HOSPITAL. Especially when she does a complete 180 from begging that the two of you get in the car and leave, to insisting that everything will be fine if you just stay. There is no justification for Micah’s inaction. He had been convinced enough to leave–this doesn’t convince him that things are way beyond his control and she needs to be under some sort of professional supervision?

It’s really only in those last 10 or so minutes that the film collapses. This happened in another recent and otherwise excellent film, The Last Exorcism. In truth, Paranormal Activity could have ended with the shot of Katie lying in bed, having convinced Micah that she doesn’t want to leave after all, with that chilling smile on her face. Let the audience imagine what will happen. It’s probably scarier than anything the director could have committed to film. On the other hand, I’ve seen the alternate ending, which in my opinion was far creepier than the theatrical one due to the fact that you never see Micah’s body, nor Katie’s “demonic” face. The demon takes what it wants–Katie’s soul, one can assume–by forcing Katie to slit her own throat. It’s simultaneously more subtle and more shocking than the theatrical ending. At this point I could launch into a tirade about test screenings and, as Roger Ebert has noted, how many endings they have ruined as a result. Another time, perhaps. Ignoring the ending, Paranormal Activity is a good horror film, and we could use more like it.

Published by Jennifer Loring

Jennifer Loring’s short fiction has appeared in the anthologies Tales from the Lake vols. 1 and 4, Nightscript IV, Dim Shores Presents Volume 2, and the Bram Stoker Award-nominated Not All Monsters and Arterial Bloom, among many others. She holds an MFA in Writing Popular Fiction with a concentration in horror fiction and is currently working toward a PhD in Interdisciplinary Studies - Humanities & Culture, focusing on queer possibility in fairy tales. Jenn lives in Philadelphia, PA, where she and her husband are owned by a turtle and two basset hounds.

9 thoughts on “Paranormal Activity

  1. Nice post. Funny how the first time I watched this movie I didn't think twice about the fact Micah was filming at the end. I think it's because I was too busy being terrified. But after seeing it again, not to mention after reading all these ghost stories in our class, the whole "why don't they leave?" question has become especially conspiuous to me. I know there's so much more to analyze in a ghost story, but I'm beginning to think it's very important to make it believable that the "victims" stay. If I ever write a ghost story, I'm going go through painstaking trouble to try to make it that way, because the last thing you want is an otherwise great story like Paranormal Activity "folding" at what is one of the most important, tension-filled moments (or any moment, really) – the conclusion.


  2. You know my opinion on the ending, and I agree with your assessment of Micah's actions (but he's a day-trader, which is just this side of lawyer on the douche-o-meter, so I tend to think, "Yeah, of course he stayed. She gave in–even if he was ready to go when it happened–and gave him what he wanted, her subservience"). I'm going to have to watch the alternate ending because that sounds a lot better than what I saw.


  3. Good post, Jenn. I'm glad you mentioned the alternate ending, which I've never seen. I'll have to look for it, as it sounds pretty disturbing. And yeah, it was impossible to like Micah, but I'm okay with that. I pretty much figured he'd get his in the end, and he did… at least in this version.


  4. Enjoyed the post, Jenn. And I agree with just about all of it. The ending didn't bother me as much as it did everyone else, but I think that might have been because I watch it over the summer, before doing all the other reading and viewing for this class. As someone who is not a fan of ghost stories, I don't usually watch them, so the ending didn't seem as trite to me. As Chris V pointed out, my reaction might be different since taking this class.


  5. A film called THE LAST BROADCAST, released a year before BLAIR WITCH, used the "found footage" thing to much better avail. And it features a truly fantastic ending.BTW—the regular ending of PARANORMAL ACTIVITY helped the ending to PA2 work quite well.


  6. By "regular," do you mean the theatrical one, or one of the other two endings? If it's the theatrical one, I have a definite problem with tacking on an ending to an otherwise self-contained movie merely to cash in on franchise potential. It says nothing good about the filmmakers' integrity. I've heard of The Last Broadcast but haven't seen it. I'll have to check it out.


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